Second project for time arts
Three different ways of retelling a true story about my life...with some exaggeration of course. But for the most part this account is completely true...ahaha
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About Me
- Monique Bonanni
- Currently an illustration major at Syracuse University Hometown: Philly!
Your drawings are very expressive and it is such a cute funny story. The change of perspective works well and you changed the time on the last one too. It is very clever.
ReplyDeleteit think that it is hilariously inappropriate. all of the parts made me laugh and i enjoyed the different points of view. i also think that the drawings were great! they show skill and character
ReplyDeleteAmazing drawings!! I like the two first point of views, but they are showing the same time. I like how the third narrative mixes things up! Awesome Job!
ReplyDeleteI think that it was a very witty and creative story line. I like how you retold the story from different points of view, and also changed the timeline in the last comic. Your drawings had sort of a neat messyness to them, which i really liked, i really like your drawing style. Good job.
ReplyDeleteThis was great! I love the three different viewpoints for this story, they were great! Nice bunny personalities
ReplyDeletei like the different perspectives you take as well as the narration. the shortening of the story in the third with no text is a nice change after the first two. the drawings are well done and help deliver the emotions that you wanted.
ReplyDeleteI really like the sketchy comic strips that you made. They are very funny and creative, and cute! I like how you changed the perspectives of the story. It worked very nicely.
ReplyDeleteI really like the econd story the best. the Detailing in all three is well put together and truely looks like a comic. maybe some color in one of the story could have been interesting to see?
ReplyDeletethe drawings were really really well done
ReplyDeletei also liked how you gave the bunnies attitudes when they look so cute and innocent.
My favorite was the last one because of it's simplicity and humor
The comics all worked well. I liked the different point of view. I think the sketches and the style of the comic from the bunnies point of view was my favorite I like how each picture was closed in by a rough jagged line it brought energy to the comic.
ReplyDeleteAwesome drawings and storyline. The second was my favorite from the perspective of the bunnies. I really liked the characters that you gave them, especially the way you drew the crazed looking rabbit. The only thing that confused me was the perspective of the third narrative.
ReplyDeletehey! really nice drawing and I love the humor you have incorporated into both of your projects so far. I think I had problems with the third one of the series, though...you altered the narrative by omitting details, but I don't see how it enhanced the story as a whole.
ReplyDeleteyour drawings could easily be mistaken for a real comic strip! The story was funny and had the right amount of dialogue vs imagery.
ReplyDeletegreat illustrations! It's an interesting story and I like the three different ways you chose to tell the story. Cute and funny!
ReplyDeleteLove your drawings! Very cute. Bunnies' perspectives were hilarious. But I think your third piece could have been stronger.
ReplyDeleteThe second narrative was most compelling to me; in part because of the drawing style (which seemed more confident than the other two), and in part because it felt like a complete story. The first narrative seemed less complete—or the jump the mess didn’t quite have the emotional emphasis to match what was going on. For the 3rd none, I am glad you simplified the story and just used the basics, as an experiment. you can’t go wrong with bunnies.
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